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Jagsharan Singh Mahal

86 words · 4 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Amarjeet Gill (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Conservatives have said for years that the government needs to change its direction to help Canadians. We strongly suggest that it accepts the Conservative economic action plan. After more than a decade of Liberal promises, major projects still face lengthy approvals. Would Bill C-39 actually get projects built faster, or would it create another layer of federal bureaucracy?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
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Claims 38%Procedure 7%Reasoning 55%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 14 wordsthis bill definitely leaves us with a number of questions.Partly on point There is increasing bureaucracy, Procedure · 6 wordsas I said in my speech.Procedure Claims · 19 wordsThis bill would create three new offices that I have read about so far, 1and there may be more, Reasoning · 47 wordsbut increasing offices itself is not going to deliver results. To deliver results, we need to get rid of Liberal laws that are standing in front of the intention of this bill, like the tanker ban and Bill C-69, 2so that we can build and deliver results.

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