Analysis · Debate reply · beta

Roman Baber

96 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Judy A. Sgro (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, it was good to see my colleague up on his feet today, although he certainly did not talk positively about Toronto. Given the fact that this member and I both share areas of the city of Toronto, we respect and acknowledge some of the challenges that have happened, but I would suggest that Bill C-39 is exactly the kind of bill that needs to come forward to help cities like Toronto, Vancouver and so on, so that we will be able to move things along faster. Many of the complaints and comments my colleague made were about that very issue of having to move things forward, whether energy, infrastructure or housing. All of those things are going to be happening much faster now, especially once, with the member’s help, we pass Bill C-39. I would like to have some additional comments on that.”
Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 48%Claims 52%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 43 wordsI believe the member whose riding is west of mine was not attentive to my presentation. I love the city of Toronto. My first love is the city of Toronto. What I do not love is what we have done to Toronto’s transportation.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsLine 5, which goes from my riding into that member’s riding, was not on time or on budget.3 There is a streetcar on Finch Avenue.2 Positioning · 3 wordsWhat an absurdity.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsThe Eglinton LRT took double the time at double the budget.1 The St. Clair streetcar is insanity, and the Ontario line is also a debacle.Partly on point

Analysed on