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Patrick Bonin

192 words · 10 sentences · 15 clauses

Replying to Frank Caputo (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is always a pleasure to rise on behalf of the people of Kamloops—Thompson—Nicola, and before I begin, I want to recognize someone from my riding who is getting married. Jodhbir Kang, who served as a school trustee in Kamloops—Thompson—Nicola, is marrying Poonam Deol. I want to take this opportunity to wish them the best of luck in their upcoming nuptials, and a long, fruitful life together. I listened to my colleague’s speech, in which he talked a lot about environmental issues, pipelines and things like that. I always wonder where the Bloc sees fossil fuels fitting into Canada. I have to fly here all the time. I drive an electric car. Where does he see that fitting in?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 99 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 2%Claims 71%Aside 2%Reasoning 26%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 3 wordsit is simple.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 120 wordsInternationally, there are two classes of countries. There are those who are following President Trump, as the Prime Minister is doing, getting into oil and gas, and then there are those who want to break free from this dependence on foreign companies and so on. Canada should invest in the transition, plan for it and not fund a new oil sands pipeline project, to the tune of over $40 billion, that will be aimed at exports and will not change the cost at the pump for people, who will remain dependent on oil and gas.1 We have everything to gain from electrification, and Quebec is already doing that. My colleague talks about the fact that he has an electric vehicle.4 Aside · 3 wordsThat is wonderful.Aside Reasoning · 50 wordsHe could also talk about the economic benefits it brings, both in terms of the fact that we keep our money and use Quebec hydroelectricity, and in terms of people’s wallets. Thinking that getting deeper into oil and gas is part of the solution will only worsen the climate crisis. Claims · 16 wordsI think he forgot about this summer’s forest fires, 2as well as the deadly heat waves.3

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