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Claims 69%Positioning 5%Reasoning 17%Thanks 8%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 107 wordsI want to talk about a local success story that is crossing borders and making us very proud.Vague de Cirque is a company based in Val‑David that has been imagining and creating shows for 15 years now.1Its show Là haut premiered in my riding at the Sentier des cimes in Mont-Blanc, 2and it was so successful that the German owners of Sentier des cimes decided to import that Quebec know-how across the Atlantic Ocean.This summer, the Vague de Cirque team flew to Usedom to put on a production specially designed around the island’s 33‑metre observation tower, offering a unique view of the Baltic Sea.34Positioning · 8 wordsWe have talent, creativity and audacity in spades.PositioningReasoning · 26 wordsWhen a creation born in the Laurentians becomes a model that is exported all the way to Germany, all of Quebec’s cultural know-how is on display.Thanks · 13 wordsCongratulations to the entire Vague de Cirque team.We are proud of them.Thanks