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Adam van Koeverden

102 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, another program that feeds bureaucracy rather than feeding kids. That is why the number of kids relying on food banks has doubled since that program came into place— Some hon. members: Oh, oh! Mr. Speaker, if the Prime Minister does not want to answer to Robin or Markita, maybe he will answer to Mike, who is working as a small businessman and a firefighter, on top of his wife’s job. They had to pay $879,000 for a home. They wrote to say they are barely keeping their heads above water as homebuilding declines and housing costs become more out of reach for Canadians. Will the Prime Minister look Mike in the eye and make his ridiculous claim that affordability has never been better in the last decade?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 65%Positioning 35%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 52 wordslet the record show that the Leader of the Opposition, the former member for Carleton, the member for Battle River—Crowfoot, just said that the more than 9.8 million meals served to over 130,000 kids in schools in Ontario is just bureaucracy.12 How about the 58,000 kids from Alberta who received school food?3 Positioning · 4 wordsIs that just bureaucracy?Positioning Claims · 8 wordsHe claims that he was raised by teachers, 4Positioning · 32 wordsyet he does not want to accept that a school food program is helping kids.Positioning After 22 years in this place, one would think he would know that he works for Canadians.5Mockery Claims · 6 wordsCanadian kids are included in that.Off point

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