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Wayne Long

84 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if only the government did not inflate food costs and deprive kids of the ability to eat, if only a record number of kids were not lined up at food banks, maybe Liberal promises and bureaucracy would mean something. I think of Jennifer. Jennifer says she has to make up recipes at the end of the month because she is living on her four final dollars to get through to her final paycheque. The Prime Minister is out of touch and Jennifer is out of money. Instead of sitting there and doing nothing, will he stand up and tell Jennifer how she is going to pay the bills?”
Statement grade
D+
52 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Aside 8%Claims 69%Positioning 23%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 7 wordsthrees are wild in the House today.Aside Claims · 13 wordsThe Leader of the Opposition is in his third decade in the House, 1Partly on pointPositioning · 5 wordsbut he has produced nothing: PositioningClaims · 45 wordsthree caucus revolts and three image reboots.2 On this side of the House, our economy is growing at an annualized rate of 3.3%.3 We are three times more competitive than the United States for investment.4Off point By the way, we just added three new caucus members.5 Positioning · 14 wordsWe have a winning hand. It is time for them to reshuffle the deck.PositioningPartly on point

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