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Joanne Thompson

75 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Jonathan Rowe (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is all talk, but no results. It is not just Liberal laws that are leaving our communities vulnerable. The RCMP has identified it needs to train close to 3,000 officers a year to maintain operations. The Liberals promised to train over 1,000. They broke their promise and never delivered. It is all talk, with no results. Are these Liberals going to blame the hard-working members of the RCMP, or are they going to stand up and finally give the police forces the tools they need?”
Statement grade
D–
43 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 33%Claims 43%Positioning 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 25 wordsI would like to welcome everyone back to the House after the summer. I want to reply to the hon. member from Newfoundland and Labrador.Procedure Claims · 32 wordsWe are moving forward with legislation across the entire sector, Partly on pointVague promisebut it is very difficult to stand and push back when the Conservatives vote against every single measure the government brings forward.1Off point Positioning · 18 wordsI am sorry, Partly on pointbut there is a level of hypocrisy here that is very difficult to listen to.PositioningOff point

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