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Patty Hajdu

112 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Shelby Kramp-Neuman (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadians are being crushed by the cost of living. Many families cannot afford rent, groceries or child care. I spoke with a woman last night who shared that she is being evicted from her home, and with a gentleman who lost his home and is on a wait-list for low-income housing. Canadians are falling deeper into debt and being forced to put their future plans on hold. They do not need more announcements from a government that says affordability is the best it has been in a decade. They need relief. Will the government pass our Conservative action plan to save Canadians money and help Canadians get back on track?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 22%Claims 69%The question 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 25 wordsthe real question is when the Conservative Party is going to get on board with the rest of Canadians, who have said, “Let’s band together.Positioning Claims · 71 wordsLet’s support each other. Let’s support Canadian businesses. Let’s support each other in our communities. Let’s make sure kids have food when they go to school. Let’s make sure that every person who wants to be a skilled tradesperson can become that person in their own province or territory.” Every one of those things I mentioned, whether it is a hand-up or a bridge to tomorrow, Conservative members have voted against.1 The question · 10 wordsMy question is this: What are the Conservatives looking for? Claims · 6 wordsI know what Canadians are saying.Off pointUnearned certainty

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