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Patty Hajdu

92 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Shelby Kramp-Neuman (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under the current government, people are being evicted from their home. In many cases, their credit cards are maxed. Something needs to give. The government often claims that the opposition only criticizes, so here is part of our plan: Instead of wasting billions of dollars on Alto high-speed rail, let us put that in the pockets of hard-working Canadians who are barely surviving from paycheque to paycheque. The Liberals are so out of touch with Canadians’ priorities, and Canadians are out of money, so my question is simple: Will the government support our Conservative economic action plan, yes or no?”
Statement grade
B–
71 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 78%Positioning 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 65 wordsin the member’s province alone, parents are saving up to $10,400 per child per year with early learning and child care.1 The national school food program in Ontario has already served 130,000 meals, 2and for indigenous communities alone, 9.8 million meals have been served .3 Through the work-sharing program with which we have supported provinces, including Ontario, we have managed to prevent over 3,100 layoffs.4 Positioning · 20 wordsThat is the work Canadians expect: that when things are difficult, we band together. Canadians are doing that every day.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 7 wordsThey are stepping up to buy Canadian—Off point

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