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Joanne Thompson

85 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Clifford Small (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, President Macron of France has announced a 1,500-metric-ton quota of snow crab, to be caught on Canada’s continental shelf. He released this shortly after his meeting with the Liberal Prime Minister a few days ago. According to French media, this Canadian crab will be caught by a French vessel and landed in Saint-Pierre and Miquelon. Why is the Liberal Prime Minister selling out our fishery to France, which has not even ratified CETA?”
Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 24%Claims 42%Anecdote 24%Promise 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 20 wordsI welcome the member back after the summer and certainly look forward to working with him and the fisheries committee.Thanks Claims · 36 wordsI want to remind the member that we make decisions locally based on science, consultation with harvesters and economic opportunities. We make decisions in the international space with other departments that are part of broader negotiations. Anecdote · 20 wordsI was in Saint-Pierre and Miquelon this summer, 1and I met with harvesters.2 I spent three days in the community, 3AnecdotePromise · 9 wordsand we have agreed to work collaboratively going forward.4Partly on pointVague promise

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