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Steven MacKinnon

256 words · 14 sentences · 18 clauses

Replying to Andrew Scheer (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the long summertime drought of Thursday questions finally comes to an end. I know much relief is felt not just in the parliamentary precinct but across the land. I would like to take this opportunity to welcome the government House leader back after what I am sure was a very busy summer for us all as we were out in our constituencies meeting with Canadians, hearing directly about their concerns and now bringing their issues back here to Parliament. I would like to ask the government House leader if during his travels this summer, he heard from Canadians who want to move past the rhetoric to results and who want the government to actually save them money. We know the government has conceded that gas taxes take a big bite out of the economy and hurt affordability. In order to save Canadians money, will he finally agree to the Conservative plan and not just have a temporary reprieve of the gas tax until January, as we saw with Bill C-38? Are there any plans for the government to make that last longer, all the way to Canada Day? Now that the government has conceded the principle that gas taxes hurt the economy, will it abandon the fuel standard tax and bring in legislation to repeal it? Finally, after all the photo ops, rhetoric and bluster, will there be a single new project that has gone through the Major Projects Office or benefited from the unprecedented powers of Bill C-5? Will we finally get to see things built, or was this summer of press conferences and MOUs just a bunch of political theatre?”
Statement grade
D
46 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 6%Aside 31%Procedure 37%Promise 7%Claims 13%Thanks 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 16 wordsI want to extend my own welcome back to Parliament to my colleague across the floor.Greeting Aside · 48 wordsI know that this particular slot in the week keeps people on the edge of their seats rapt, as we do the Thursday question at this time every week. This is season two, episode one, and we do have to leave some cliffhangers, in the best TV tradition.Aside Procedure · 15 wordsI have taken careful note of the requests of my friend, the opposition House leader.Procedure Promise · 18 wordsHe can be sure that we will continue to find ways to make life more affordable for Canadians, Partly on pointVague promiseClaims · 33 wordsand prolonging the excise tax relief is an important step. As for the war in Iran, any increase in revenue that the government may have derived from it, we are returning to Canadians.Vague promise Aside · 31 wordsWith respect to major projects, that is where we will leave the cliffhanger. As we return for the next episode, the opposition House Leader may have a different question to ask.AsidePartly on point Procedure · 80 wordsThis afternoon and tomorrow, we will continue with the second reading debate of Bill C-39, the building Canada strong act.1 When we return after spending a week in our ridings, we will resume consideration of that bill on Monday and Wednesday.2 I would also like to inform the House that Tuesday, October 6, and Thursday, October 8, shall be allotted days.3 Finally, Friday will be devoted to the second reading debate of Bill C-37, the first nations clean water act.4Procedure Thanks · 15 wordsThank you and welcome back, Mr. Speaker. It is good to see you again, too.Thanks

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