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Abdelhaq Sari

131 words · 11 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Burton Bailey (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, the Liberals claim this bill would get projects built, but there are already 500 projects stuck in the federal permitting process. Why does the government not simply approve these projects instead of continuing to add more bureaucracy, more bills, more offices and more announcements that have not built anything?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 18%Promise 15%Procedure 6%Claims 34%Reasoning 11%The ask 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 23 wordsfirst of all, members need to listen carefully to the speeches given by each of my colleagues on our side of the House.PositioningOff point Promise · 19 wordsWhat we are saying is that we want to deliver an answer within a year, whether positive or negative.1 Procedure · 4 wordsThat is very important.Procedure Claims · 23 wordsThis is no blanket approval process. We are not interested in giving out carte blanche. On the contrary, there will be some negotiation. Procedure · 4 wordsThat is very important.Procedure Reasoning · 14 wordsNow, to speed things up, we simply need to make decisions in committee faster. The ask · 23 wordsIf people here really want to move faster, the Conservatives will have to co-operate with us so we can make decisions in committee.Partly on point Claims · 21 wordsOnce again, Bill C-5, Bill C-39’s predecessor, laid a strong foundation.2 Now, we are setting the stage for all future projects.

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