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Mike Kelloway

116 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Andréanne Larouche (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, I thank my colleague for his speech, but despite what my colleagues have been saying for a while, they are trying to downplay the impact on labour rights. We are being told that environmental rights are not being rolled back. I think that environmental and labour groups will do their job and that, when we measure the scope of all this, we will truly realize that we have a government that is undermining democracy. In addition to a crushing rollback of workers’ democratic rights and environment laws, there is also an encroachment on Quebec’s jurisdictions. What is more, the government is not respecting jurisdictions. The Liberal government is creating a new and umpteenth transportation structure: the national trade corridors council. What does that mean? We in the Bloc Québécois refuse to allow the federal government to subject businesses to rules when, once again, they do not fall under its jurisdiction over transportation. In the end, we are really going backwards. What does he have to say about this jurisdictional encroachment?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 69 / 100
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Positioning 17%Claims 41%Reasoning 36%Anecdote 5%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsone thing that seems to be missing over the last four days is the “why”. Why are we doing this?Positioning Claims · 33 wordsThe Prime Minister spoke to it at Davos when he talked about a rupture in the economy and how the only thing we can control is what we can control as a country.1 Reasoning · 42 wordsThat means working with the provinces, with Canadian businesses and indeed with Canadian workers to ensure that we are evolving our economy and putting the steps in place to make sure that happens.Vague promise That does not happen without Canadian workers, unionized workers.Partly on point Anecdote · 6 wordsI come from Cape Breton Island.2Anecdote Claims · 15 wordsCape Breton Island was built on unionized workers; so was Canada and so will Canada.Off point

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