Replying to Kristina Tesser Derksen (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, for me, the underlying sentiment of this bill is about unity. It is about Canadians coming together regardless of political affiliation or background and understanding that it is a pivotal time for our country to have national unity. Just a few moments ago, the opposition member for Thornhill mentioned the lasting legacy of former prime minister Stephen Harper. Former prime minister Harper delivered closing remarks at the Canada investment summit recently. I would like to ask my colleague, the parliamentary secretary, what he thinks it means to Canadians and what it means to him and the people in his riding that a former Conservative prime minister delivered remarks with such an undercurrent of unity, of coming together for Canada and of support for the investment summit that was held by our Prime Minister?”
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B
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Average 78 / 100
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Procedure 11%Anecdote 26%Reasoning 63%
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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI will go back to Cape Breton for a second to tie this together.ProcedureAnecdote · 35 wordsMy father was in charge of mine rescue for about 35 years.1He trained the individuals who went underground to save or recover folks, and he often talked about the idea that crisis reveals character.AnecdoteOff pointReasoning · 84 wordsI see with leadership here in the House and leadership outside of the House, and I will give former prime minister Harper his due, that crisis reveals character.Partly on pointWe are at an inflection point in this country that requires all of us to come together and work together.That does not mean we cannot be questioned, but cynicism never created a business, cynicism never built a house, cynicism never fed a hungry child and cynicism is not what is going to build this country.Partly on point