Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Gabriel Hardy

1850 words · 127 sentences · 146 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 85 / 100
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Claims 70%Positioning 11%Procedure 2%The question 1%Reasoning 8%The ask 6%Promise 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 260 wordsBenjamin is 20 years old.24 He comes from my riding of Montmorency—Charlevoix. School was not always easy for him. Although he struggled to finish his studies, he later completed a vocational diploma in sheet metal work. Now he works six days a week. He gets up at 4 a.m. to install ventilation systems in homes in Quebec, homes that he knows very well he will never be able to afford. Benjamin wrote to me with a very simple question: When will the government keep its promises?Partly on point According to Statistics Canada, the cost of groceries has increased by 29% since 2021.1 Evidently, Benjamin’s wages have not kept pace. There are many people like Benjamin in Montmorency—Charlevoix, people who work full time but who have to put things back on the grocery store shelves every week because they cannot afford them and because they are struggling to make ends meet.Off point Following the last election in 2025, the minority government had to work with the opposition parties. We all had to work together to find solutions to move the country forward. At that time, the Liberal government introduced Bill C-5, 2which made it possible to build at a pace not seen in generations. The government granted itself exceptional powers to deal with an exceptional situation, meaning the trade war with our neighbours to the south. Canadians were clear. They were asking us to work together in their best interests, to act for the common good and to avoid politicizing the situation.Partly on point The Conservatives said yes to Bill C-5 out of respect for Canadians.3 Positioning · 25 wordsWe did it not because we were naive, but because we wanted to be co-operative. For years, we have wanted to get this country building.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsWe kept our word and respected the will of the people.Partly on point We voted in favour of Bill C-5.4 Procedure · 10 wordsToday, I want to ask a question on Benjamin’s behalf.Procedure The question · 27 wordsWhat did the Liberals do with that power that was entrusted to them and with the co-operation that we extended to them out of respect for democracy? Claims · 117 wordsThe answer is that they got a majority without voters returning to the polls, through agreements made behind closed doors. They bought themselves a majority and took control of Parliament.Off point The Liberals have been in power for 11 years.5 Since then, there has been no shortage of promises. Allow me to recap the slogans and announcements made since 2017 about the housing crisis. In 2017, there was the Reaching Home program, part of the national housing strategy.6 The Liberals announced that housing would be built for all Canadians, that more homes would be built more quickly and that housing would be made affordable. There was also Build Canada Homes, which they said would unlock more housing development. Positioning · 5 wordsThese are nothing but slogans.Positioning Claims · 61 wordsIn 2024, they said it was time to build, and they proposed Canada’s housing plan. They said they would increase supply, reduce costs and cut red tape. They said that every Canadian deserves a place to call home. Once again, these were just slogans.Partly on point In 2025, they unveiled “Building Canada Strong”, supposedly the most ambitious plan since the Second World War.7 Positioning · 20 wordsA promise is like a cheque. For 11 years, that cheque has always bounced for the same reason: insufficient funds.Positioning Claims · 14 wordsSince the Liberal government took power, there have been plenty of slogans and promises, Positioning · 7 wordsbut not many shovels in the ground.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 3 wordsIn the meantime, ProcedureClaims · 61 wordsas I said earlier, grocery costs have risen by 29% since 2021, and the price of gas has increased by 23% or so in a year.8 One couple from Charlevoix, both 23 years old, wrote to me last week. To save money, they have to shop at three different grocery stores. They skipped taking a vacation because gas costs too much. Positioning · 8 wordsThat is the reality ordinary people are facing.Positioning Claims · 92 wordsThat is the result of the Liberals’ decisions.Off point The government says that the situation is urgent and that we need to act fast and pass Bill C-39 as fast as possible. This emergency did not come out of nowhere. It comes after close to 11 years of delaying and failing to get this country building; 11 years without diversifying our markets; 11 years without building the infrastructure that would have put us in a position of strength going into the negotiations with the Americans; 11 years of growing poorer instead of growing. Positioning · 41 wordsDoes anyone find this reminiscent of the fable of the grasshopper and the ant? Well, the government has spent the past 11 years trying to look good to the rest of the world, inviting everyone to come and enjoy our services, PositioningClaims · 9 wordsand constantly asking Canadians to pay more for less.Off point Procedure · 8 wordsI want to come back to Bill C-5.Procedure Claims · 122 wordsIt passed 15 months ago, 9and yet not a single project has been designated as a project of national interest under that legislation.10 Meanwhile, a new Major Projects Office has been established and funded to the tune of $214 million over five years.11 That office cost $42 million last year alone.12 When I asked the director of the Major Projects Office how many major projects had been launched for that $42 million, she said none.13 Worse still, more than six new federal agencies, offices or entities have been created.14 There is plenty of bureaucracy and administration, but nothing is actually being produced. Today, that same government, which now holds a majority, is presenting a massive 250-page bill.15 It was introduced on Monday.16 Positioning · 40 wordsThe government is telling us once again that we need to move quickly, that we need to pick up the pace and move at a speed never seen since the last time we moved at a speed never seen before.Positioning Claims · 22 wordsFifteen months later, it is back with the same promise and a catchier title that is a little more grandiose and impressive. Positioning · 7 wordsIt is just more smoke and mirrors.Positioning Procedure · 4 wordsI mentioned Benjamin earlier.Procedure Claims · 102 wordsBenjamin makes $800 a week.25 His pay goes toward the car he uses to get to work, groceries, rent, insurance and gas. In his letter to me, he wrote in all caps that every penny counts. When Benjamin asks for a raise, it will not be for little luxuries. It will be for groceries, rent, gas and insurance.Off point Workers who are fighting for higher wages are not enemies of our economy. They are the ones who build it with their own hands at 4 a.m.Partly on point Members may recall that in the summer of 2025, 10,000 Air Canada flight attendants went on strike.17 Positioning · 5 wordsWhat were they asking for?Positioning Claims · 125 wordsThey were asking to be paid for the hours they work, that is, during boarding, during time spent waiting and during airport delays.26 These hours were unpaid. Less than 12 hours into this strike, the government invoked section 107 of the Canada Labour Code to send them back to work.18 All they wanted was to be paid for the hours they work. Part 3 of Bill C‑39 reforms section 107.19 The government is talking about creating a framework to prevent abuse. Workers are saying that this will make it almost impossible for port, rail and airline workers to invoke their right to strike. Those who have experienced the effects of the law tell us that they see things completely differently from what the government says. Reasoning · 40 wordsOur role here is to understand, analyze and defend the interests of workers and Canadians. The role of the opposition is to be loyal to the people and to the nation. I am not talking about administrative structures and organizations. Positioning · 13 wordsI am talking about real people.Partly on point I am talking about people like Benjamin.Positioning Reasoning · 17 wordsI am talking about standing up for Canadians who are working but still cannot make ends meet.Off point Claims · 26 wordsTo be fair, there are some good points in the bill. For example, the “one project, one review, one year” approach is a very good idea. Positioning · 11 wordsIt is so good, in fact, that it was our idea.Positioning Claims · 48 wordsMy colleague from Louis-Saint-Laurent—Akiawenhrahk introduced it in the House as Bill C-375.20 In May 2024, the House rejected it by 177 votes to 150.21 The Liberals voted against it.22 The Minister of Finance told us this week that the Conservatives do not have a monopoly on common sense, 23Positioning · 14 wordsbut it seems we laid claim to most of it before he came around.Positioning Claims · 28 wordsI do not, however, blame the government for having changed its mind in the end. It is good that the Liberals are discovering that they have their shortcomings, Reasoning · 42 wordsbecause the ideas we are defending here do not belong to any one party. They belong to all those who want to move the country forward, who want us to prosper as a society and who want to build a better future. Claims · 69 wordsAfter 11 years of big announcements, Benjamin wants more than just good intentions. He wants things to work. He wants to see progress and results that make a difference for him. Another person wrote to me recently to say that Canadians are not asking for promises. They are asking for real, measurable results. This person asked us to spend less time playing politics and more time finding real solutions.Partly on point Procedure · 8 wordsI want to suggest two very simple solutions.Procedure The ask · 82 wordsThe first is that we do a real study in committee. I do not want to see the debates cut short or the committee voting to speed up the work because the government has a majority now. We need to listen to what workers, employers, experts and first nations have to say. We need to listen to people in regions like mine and our business owners. We need to hear from those who may be positively or negatively affected by the bill. Claims · 10 wordsWe cannot analyze 250 pages in just a few days. The ask · 13 wordsMy second suggestion is that we need to actually stick to the schedule. Claims · 41 wordsThe government is talking about taking one year to assess a project. There cannot be any hidden delays, any extensions granted behind closed doors or any claims that we need to understand that there is a backlog. That is a promise. The ask · 23 wordsIf the government is promising that it will take one year, then the process needs to take one year from start to finish. Reasoning · 41 wordsWhen the government tells us that this is urgent, that we need to trust it and grant it more power because there is a crisis, our duty is not to rush into anything. It is to slow down and read carefully, Claims · 37 wordsbecause every comma, every period and every sentence raises important concerns. It is because every comma affects a worker’s wage. Every period affects a construction project in some region. Every sentence represents a promise made to Benjamin.Partly on point Promise · 18 wordsWe want to make sure that these promises do not end up as a bounced cheque this time.Vague promise Claims · 40 wordsBenjamin will get up at 4 a.m. tomorrow and head out to build a house he cannot afford.Off point He does not want to hear any more slogans. He wants us to build a country where working hard is still enough. Positioning · 16 wordsSlogans do not build anything. Construction sites do. It is high time we started building together.PositioningPartly on point

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