“Mr. Speaker, almost a year and a half ago, we had building Canada, with all kinds of great promises and platitudes saying that the government is going to do this and that. Almost a year and a half later, we have building Canada strong, and the member opposite stands to make the same promises that the Liberals are going to do this and that. However, Canadians have not seen anything happen. In fact, I will quote the member’s own speech: “we need to get things done”. He also said that we need to speed things up. It has been a year and a half, and he has the audacity to stand there and say that. Does the member opposite believe that the Liberals can continue to fool Canadians with yet another set of promises and nothing getting done? It is completely embarrassing.”
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Aside 7%Reasoning 18%Claims 65%Positioning 9%
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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 8 wordsthat is a good one: “nothing getting done”.1AsideReasoning · 13 wordsSomeone much wiser than me once said that whatever is exaggerated becomes meaningless.Claims · 33 wordsUnfortunately, we have had a great example of that in the House because for about a year and a half or so, everything has been consistently and continuously exaggerated.Partly on pointWe are moving forward.Vague promiseReasoning · 7 wordsFor that, we need significant legislative change.Claims · 39 wordsThat is what we would be doing here.It would be a significant legislative change, which at the end of the day, I suspect, the Conservatives will actually approve.I think they will vote in favour of Bill C-39, Positioning · 10 wordsbut now they are just going off and saying things.PositioningPartly on point