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Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case. Not graded
Signal
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Claims 6% Thanks 94%
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Claims · 10
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 11 words Brockville, Ontario, is home to outstanding businesses, organizations and community leaders. Thanks · 169 words I want to congratulate the winners and recipients of the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence.1 I congratulate Wajahat Khaleeque, the business person of the year; 2 Sheena Earl, the young professional of the year; 3 Terry Wills, citizen of the year; 4 and Dane Fellows, who received the President’s Award.5 Congratulations also go to Rob and Kim Williams at Canadian Tire Brockville, the business of the year; 6 Rick and Tanya Orr at the Butcher Shop, small business of the year; 7 the folks at the Downtown Brockville BIA, which won the Tourism Award; 8 the Brockville Rowing Club, which received the Community Excellence Award; 9 and Jackie at Anthophile Café, who is the recipient of the Ben TeKamp Memorial Award.10 I want to congratulate all of the finalists, all of the nominees and everyone who took time to recognize them. I thank Pam Robertson and everyone at the chamber of commerce for helping us to highlight the excellence in Brockville that is seen across Leeds and Grenville. Congratulations to everyone. Thanks
Signal · 6
15 of 15 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I want to congratulate the winners and recipients of the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I congratulate Wajahat Khaleeque, the business person of the year;” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Sheena Earl, the young professional of the year;” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Terry Wills, citizen of the year;” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “and Dane Fellows, who received the President’s Award.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Congratulations also go to Rob and Kim Williams at Canadian Tire Brockville, the business of the year;” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Rick and Tanya Orr at the Butcher Shop, small business of the year;” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “the folks at the Downtown Brockville BIA,” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “which won the Tourism Award;” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “the Brockville Rowing Club,” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “which received the Community Excellence Award;” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “and Jackie at Anthophile Café, who is the recipient of the Ben TeKamp Memorial Award.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I want to congratulate all of the finalists, all of the nominees and everyone who took time to recognize them.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I thank Pam Robertson and everyone at the chamber of commerce for helping us to highlight the excellence in Brockville that is seen across Leeds and Grenville.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Congratulations to everyone.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · no score
Not applicable: nothing to answer. Excluded from the average.
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue.
Respect · 100
0 of 15 deductions are Respect
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Nothing lost points.
Clarity · 100
0 of 15 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Nothing lost points.
Claims · 10
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1 “the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence” The Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce held its 67th Awards of Excellence. search 2 “Wajahat Khaleeque, the business person of the year” Wajahat Khaleeque was named business person of the year at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 3 “Sheena Earl, the young professional of the year” Sheena Earl was named young professional of the year at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 4 “Terry Wills, citizen of the year” Terry Wills was named citizen of the year at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 5 “Dane Fellows, who received the President’s Award” Dane Fellows received the President’s Award at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 6 “Rob and Kim Williams at Canadian Tire Brockville, the business of the year” Canadian Tire Brockville, run by Rob and Kim Williams, was named business of the year at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 7 “Rick and Tanya Orr at the Butcher Shop, small business of the year” The Butcher Shop, run by Rick and Tanya Orr, was named small business of the year at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 8 “which won the Tourism Award; ” The Downtown Brockville BIA won the Tourism Award at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 9 “which received the Community Excellence Award; ” The Brockville Rowing Club received the Community Excellence Award at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search 10 “Jackie at Anthophile Café, who is the recipient of the Ben TeKamp Memorial Award” Jackie of Anthophile Café received the Ben TeKamp Memorial Award at the 67th Brockville and District Chamber of Commerce Awards of Excellence. search
