Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jenna Sudds

145 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

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Greeting 15%Claims 40%Positioning 21%Thanks 6%Promise 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsit is an absolute honour to be back in the House representing the amazing people of Kanata, Stittsville, Carp and Bells Corners.Greeting Claims · 58 wordsThis summer was filled with moments that highlighted the absolute best in our community, from the Bells Corners Summer Bash to celebrating the 30th anniversary of the Kanata Seniors Council to visiting residents on Canada Day at Tweedsmuir on the Park to the groundbreaking of the new Hindu temple to visiting with families at the Kanata multicultural festival.123 Positioning · 31 wordsThe warmth and strength of our community inspire everything I do. I return to Parliament this week focused and energized by our government’s work to build a strong and resilient Canada.Positioning Thanks · 9 wordsI thank my amazing community for a wonderful summer.Thanks Promise · 25 wordsI am ready to bring their voices back to Parliament Hill and keep working hard alongside our government to build a stronger Canada for all.Vague promise

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