“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister is out of touch, blaming everyone but himself for skyrocketing fuel prices. He blames foreign factors. Yesterday, he blamed the provinces, but it is his industrial carbon tax and clean fuel standard that are hiking prices. Instead of playing the blame game, why does the Prime Minister not simply control what he can control and lift all federal taxes on fuel until at least Canada Day, saving the average family $1,200?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 25%Procedure 7%Claims 61%Promise 8%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 25 wordsI know the member opposite is slightly preoccupied with the words he sees in his hand and the lines he is given by his party, Off pointMockeryProcedure · 9 wordsbut it is a news flash perhaps to him, ProcedureClaims · 68 wordsand not to anyone else in this House, that we are in a trade war.The Strait of Hormuz has been blocked.1The oil price shocks that Canada is experiencing are consistent with those in every other country in the world.What our government is doing is suspending the fuel excise tax.2We did it over the summer, and now we have extended it by another five months.3Positioning · 9 wordsThat is significant support at the pumps for Canadians.PositioningClaims · 16 wordsWe are doing this while investing, making generational investments in our economy to grow our economy, Promise · 11 wordswhich we will stay focused on every step of the way.Off pointVague promise