“Mr. Speaker, harvest is here, right now, this very moment. Combines, tractors and grain trucks are starting up and pulling into the field. It is go time. Hopes and plans come to the test. Will the weather hold? Will there be a breakdown? What will the prices be? Everything is on the line. It is supposed to be a payday, not a pay more day. Diesel prices are at near record levels in Canada. Farmers are facing nearly double what they paid last year. One combine can now cost more than $1,100 a day to fuel. Why is the Liberal government making Canadian farmers pay so much for diesel just to bring in their harvest?”
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 6 wordslet me start by saying that, ProcedurePositioning · 26 wordsand this is certainly true on this side of the House, all members of Parliament know the important work that Canadian farmers do across the country.PositioningPartly on pointUnearned certaintyClaims · 73 wordsThat is exactly why we have eliminated the excise tax on gasoline and diesel.1It is why we have increased business risk management programs.It is why we have introduced the national food security strategy, which is over three billion dollars’ worth of targeted support to the agriculture sector and the agri-food sector across the country.2We have a plan to help support farmers in the country.Vague promiseThat member is from farm country.Partly on pointPositioning · 29 wordsWhat should be a little embarrassing to the Conservative Party is that, a year ago, when they had the opportunity to present their plan, there was nothing for Canadians.3PositioningOff point