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Ryan Turnbull

104 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Rhonda Kirkland (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Clifford is a senior from Oshawa who called my office this week to share his struggles. He is on a fixed income and is having difficulty paying for rent, buying his groceries and even affording the medication he needs to survive. These are life’s necessities, not luxuries. The Conservatives have a plan that would actually work to lower inflation and save Canadians money on all of life’s essentials. Will the Liberals adopt our Conservative economic action plan so Canadians like Clifford and other Oshawa seniors can finally afford their rent, groceries and medication?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 38%Reasoning 13%Claims 48%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 36 wordswe know that all of Durham region is benefiting from the work our government is doing to create a stronger economy in Canada, Unearned certaintywhile supporting a strong social safety net that we take pride in protecting.Positioning Reasoning · 14 wordsWe are creating jobs because good-paying jobs are the best way to address affordability. Claims · 50 wordsIn our region alone, the Pickering nuclear plant refurbishment is over 30,000 jobs, 1and the new nuclear project at Darlington makes that number over 50,000 good-paying jobs in Durham region.2 That is jobs for our youth and for workers coming out of our auto plants who may need new work. Positioning · 4 wordsThat is good news.PositioningPartly on point

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