“Mr. Speaker, just after this Prime Minister’s big meeting in Saint-Pierre and Miquelon, French media announced that France will now be fishing 1,500 tonnes of snow crab on the Canadian continental shelf, to be caught by a French vessel and processed on the French islands. This will cause DFO to reduce Canadian quotas, harming the livelihoods of fishermen and plant workers in the riding I represent. Why is the Liberal Prime Minister more interested in cozying up with his European buddies than standing up for the livelihoods of Newfoundlanders and Labradorians?”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 61 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Promise 51%Positioning 49%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Promise · 11 wordsCanada will always protect our sovereignty and our fisheries, full stop.Vague promisePositioning · 6 wordsThe Prime Minister has been clear.PositioningPromise · 15 wordsDetails about any future arrangement with the European Union will be presented to all Canadians.Partly on pointHidden agencyPositioning · 19 wordsThe member is back to his old scare tactics, Off pointbut our government is focused on growing Canada’s seafood economy.PositioningPartly on point