“Mr. Speaker, last year, I warned the government that wildfires, landslides and accidents regularly shut down Highway 97, leaving Okanagan residents stranded. The Liberals responded that they were committed to working with provinces to find a solution that works for everyone. Since then, the Bald Range wildfire cut my region in two, and this week, a serious accident closed the Bennett Bridge for hours. West Kelowna mayor-elect Stephen Johnston said, “we need immediate action to create greater stability”. Will the Government now honour its commitment, work with British Columbia and upgrade the FSR 201 before the next closure becomes a crisis?”
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C+
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Average 68 / 100
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Thanks 12%Promise 42%Claims 47%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsfirst of all, my sympathies go out to all the people who were affected.ThanksPromise · 28 wordsI absolutely agree that we want to work with British Columbia every step of the way to deal with climate change and with the wildfires that are happening.Vague promiseClaims · 56 wordsThat is why we have invested so much money this year, for example, in water bombers.When provinces called upon us for assistance, we were able to provide extra aircraft.1We have the Canadian humanitarian workforce program, where we were able to provide supplemental volunteers to assist British Columbians when British Columbia asked us for assistance.2Promise · 22 wordsWe have made it very clear to the B.C. government that we will work with British Columbia every step of the way.Partly on pointVague promise