“Mr. Speaker, we know that access to good, nutritious food can make all the difference in a child’s day. Kids deserve to learn on a full stomach so they can reach their full potential, not to mention the obvious benefits to families with lower grocery bills. Can the secretary of state tell us what our government has done to ensure access to good food programs across Canada?”
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Thanks 16%Claims 67%Positioning 17%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI would like to thank my colleague from Scarborough Southwest for her excellent advocacy.ThanksClaims · 59 wordsNutritious meals at school do indeed help kids reach their full potential.They also help ease the pressure on grocery costs for families.Partly on pointWith federal investments, school food programs are now reaching 400,000 more students across Canada.1In Ontario, this means approximately 242 additional schools are serving meals this year, bringing the total participation of Ontario schools to 92%.2Positioning · 15 wordsThe other side foolishly calls this bureaucracy.Off pointWe call this more children learning and thriving.PositioningPartly on point