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Procedure 13%Claims 71%Thanks 16%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordsit is an honour to rise virtually in the House to present a petition of deep concern to constituents.ProcedureClaims · 69 wordsIt relates to the very pressing issue of the critically endangered population of southern resident killer whales.The petitioners note that with the expansion at Roberts Bank, which is a very devastating ecological project, as well as the increased oil tanker traffic, there is a need to protect whales.Their habitat shrinks when they are in an acoustic environment, when there is noise and there are vessels too close.Procedure · 5 wordsI know I have summarized.ProcedureClaims · 16 wordsHowever, unusually, the key action component of the petition I am presenting has been acted upon, Thanks · 8 wordsso I now add a note of thanks.ThanksClaims · 42 wordsThe petitioners ask for the same distance requirements that Washington state put into place: that recreational and whale-watching vessels stay 1,000 metres back from this threatened population.1In fact, the Government of Canada has now adopted the same regulations as Washington state.2Thanks · 20 wordsIt is a rare occasion to present a petition and also thank the Government of Canada for acting on it.Thanks