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Vincent Ho

62 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Jeff Kibble (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, almost a year and a half ago, we had the Building Canada Act, with grand promises of new organizations, Liberals will do this, they will do that, and with all kinds of platitudes but short on specifics. In fact, the member for Winnipeg North just stood up and said there was half a trillion dollars of commitments, but there are no signatures. There are no deals. There are no new mines. There is nothing. We now have this building Canada strong act. The Liberals have added the word “strong”. Does the member feel that, under Liberal governance, the Liberals are doomed to continue failing, as they did with the first bill? They have added one word. Are the Liberals doomed to failure through their inaction and announcements, lack of signatures, and lack of actual decisions and projects starting, let alone being completed?”
Statement grade
D–
44 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 11%Claims 15%Procedure 16%Positioning 58%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsthe member brings up a pertinent point.Thanks Claims · 9 wordsCanadians are still reading and going through the bill, Partly on pointProcedure · 10 wordsbut there is only one thing we know for certain, ProcedurePositioning · 36 wordswhich is that it would create Liberal bureaucracy, delays and Liberal photo ops.Unearned certainty It would be more talk with no results for Canadians. Canadians are desperate for results. They do not need more Liberal press releases.Positioning

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