Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Claims 77%Anecdote 17%Thanks 6%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 102 wordsthis summer, Markham—Stouffville lost one of its best-known residents, 1and our country has lost an extraordinary Canadian.For more than six decades, Lloyd Robertson was a trusted and reassuring voice through moments that shaped our nation.2His career began in 1952 on Radio CJCS in his hometown of Stratford, Ontario.3He would go on to become one of Canada’s best-known and most highly respected television news anchors.He was voted Canada’s most trusted news anchor by TV Guide readers 11 years in a row, 4and his outstanding work was recognized with a myriad of awards and honours, including the Order of Canada.5Anecdote · 27 wordsI had the pleasure of meeting Lloyd Robertson many times, and just a few years ago, he emceed our local Markham District Veterans Association’s Remembrance Day ceremony.6AnecdoteClaims · 20 wordsHe was a gentleman, was very kind and was clearly a patriotic Canadian.I know he will be deeply missed.Thanks · 10 wordsI offer my sincere condolences to his family and friends.Thanks