“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister loves to take credit for projects that were approved before he ever became Prime Minister. Soon enough, he is going to be announcing that he is granting a permit for the Canadian Pacific Railway. Speaking of those projects, not only has he failed to buy Canadian; he now cannot build Canadian. Just after the announcement that, after a 10-year delay, LNG phase two is going ahead, we now learn that the steel will not come from the out-of-work Hamilton steelworkers. It will come from China. Why is the Prime Minister sending our steel jobs to Beijing?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 50 wordsI am glad the Leader of the Opposition has brought up the second-largest private sector investment in Canadian history, an LNG Canada success story that will make this country more independent and more prosperous.1Partly on pointIt is a project that will have 15,000 tonnes of Canadian steel in the broader ecosystem.2Positioning · 6 wordsThis government is building Canada strong.PositioningOff pointVague promise