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Jamie Schmale

106 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 92 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 83%The question 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 88 wordsTim and Mona Deslippe lost their son Nathan to a brutal murder in London, Ontario, in 2016.1 Nathan’s killer beat him to death in what the courts say was a prolonged and violent attack before the murderer dragged his body to the bathtub, took a shower and a selfie as well.2 The killer was sentenced to life with no parole for 14 years, 3yet Tim and Mona have already had to respond to multiple requests for escorted temporary leave, 4which have revictimized the family over and over again. The question · 18 wordsWhen will the government fix its broken Liberal parole system and, after 11 long years, put victims first?Unearned certainty

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