“Mr. Speaker, Tim and Mona Deslippe lost their son Nathan to a brutal murder in London, Ontario, in 2016. Nathan’s killer beat him to death in what the courts say was a prolonged and violent attack before the murderer dragged his body to the bathtub, took a shower and a selfie as well. The killer was sentenced to life with no parole for 14 years, yet Tim and Mona have already had to respond to multiple requests for escorted temporary leave, which have revictimized the family over and over again. When will the government fix its broken Liberal parole system and, after 11 long years, put victims first?”
Statement grade
A
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Average 93 / 100
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Claims 75%Reasoning 25%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 43 wordsas the Minister of Public Safety has said, we are open to reform.1Vague promiseWe have made more reforms to the Criminal Code of Canada than any government has.2The act that the members were speaking of was last changed by the Conservative government, 3Reasoning · 14 wordsso it is not a Liberal act.In fact, it is a Conservative one.