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Sean Fraser

128 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, media in the Quebec City region have reported that, in the past month alone, more than 10 cars and six residential buildings have been set on fire, possibly by organized crime, in a bid to gain control of the drug market. Even in my riding of Charlesbourg—Haute-Saint-Charles, a teenager allegedly stole a vehicle before attempting to ram police officers in order to escape. Since the Liberals took office, criminals no longer fear the consequences of their crimes. Our Conservative action plan aims to keep Canadians safe. Will the Liberals adopt it?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 71 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 10%Claims 56%Promise 7%Positioning 27%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsbefore I answer, I would like to thank my colleague for this question.Thanks Claims · 72 wordsIt is very important to recognize that we need to implement the new legislation that the House passed during the last parliamentary session.1Vague promise We have put forward a series of different laws that tackle, very specifically, crimes such as arson and violent crimes involving auto theft.2 We are seeing nationally the rate of crime actually coming down.3 We have worked very carefully with our partners, with the province and with law enforcement, Promise · 9 wordsand we are going to continue to do so.Vague promise Positioning · 34 wordsThe only body that seems not to be collaborating in the effort to adopt stronger laws to produce safer communities is the Conservative Party of Canada. If Conservatives would like to collaborate with us—PositioningOff point

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