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Evan Solomon

77 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Kathy Borrelli (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals promised to stand up for Canadian workers. Back in Windsor, we are still waiting. Last week’s layoffs at Stelco are just the latest warning. Last October, Windsor workers called out the use of foreign steel on the Banwell-E.C. Row project, even though Canadian producers were ready to compete for the work. Canadian projects should use Canadian steel and Canadian workers. When will the Liberals stop the rhetoric and actually deliver the results they promised Canadian workers?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Positioning 29%Claims 71%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordswe are defending Canada’s steel industry.PositioningVague promise Claims · 55 wordsWe are defending the auto industry.Partly on pointVague promise We are investing in businesses, including in the member’s riding.3 We have delivered $7.5 billion in support to businesses and workers across the country, including steel companies.1 I was at Daybar, 2which uses Hamilton steel for doors and frames that it can export, and there are many other companies.Partly on point Positioning · 16 wordsThe Conservatives should get on board and start building this country up, not tearing it down.PositioningOff point

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