“Mr. Speaker, the member says “bold and decisive”. That is exactly what we have seen since the last federal election, when Canadians elected a new Prime Minister and 70-plus new Liberal members of Parliament. All one needs to do is take a look at what has transpired. The Conservatives like to be critical of the Major Projects Office: 24-plus projects and half a trillion dollars. What about the investment summit hosted by the Prime Minister? Again, we are talking about half a trillion dollars. We are talking about historic amounts of money to support a stronger and healthier Canadian economy. The only division in the House of Commons is within the Conservative Party. When will the Conservative Party recognize a good thing and get behind Bill C-39?”
Statement grade
D+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 70. The grade is held to 51, 30 above Relevance.
51 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 34%Claims 35%The ask 30%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Positioning · 4 wordsBold action, Mr. Speaker?PositioningClaims · 41 wordsThe member has been in the House a lot longer than I have.1He has enjoyed a very long political career that stems back to his time in the provincial legislature in Manitoba.2He has seen many governments come and go.Off pointPositioning · 23 wordsHe knows this government has done nothing when it comes to actually taking bold, substantive action to get things done in this country.PositioningThe ask · 27 wordsIf he wants to take bold action, he should stand up in this place and denounce all the disastrous policies of Justin Trudeau’s time that he supported.Positioning · 13 wordsThat would be a step in the right direction.That would be bold, PositioningThe ask · 8 wordsand I would welcome him to do that.Off point