Replying to Xavier Barsalou-Duval (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, in his speech, the Leader of the Opposition implied that a Conservative government in Ottawa would dampen Quebec’s drive for independence. This raises several questions for me. Let us look at the facts rather than his speech: Yesterday, Quebeckers elected a Parti Québécois government, which obviously advocates for Quebec’s independence. Under Conservative leadership, from 2012 to 2014, a Parti Québécois government was also elected, one that advocated for Quebec’s independence. For the benefit of my Conservative colleague, I would like to add that the Bloc Québécois has never disappeared. The Bloc Québécois is still here. There have always been people fighting for Quebec to stand on its own two feet. My question is this: Can he not acknowledge that it is a legitimate aspiration for a nation to have its own country?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 40 wordsafter 10 years of Conservative government, the Bloc Québécois did not even have official party status in the House of Commons.1In Quebec, the Parti Québécois was in opposition.2At that time, discussions about a referendum were not even happening, Reasoning · 10 wordsbecause the Conservative Party had managed to unite the country, Positioning · 4 wordsas it always does.PositioningClaims · 21 wordsIt had recognized the Quebec nation, restored to the provinces the powers that rightfully belonged to them, including the Quebec nation, 3Positioning · 4 wordsand respected all Canadians.PositioningClaims · 20 wordsYoung people also had the hope that they could buy a home, start a family and build a good life.Off pointReasoning · 15 wordsIn a climate of hope like that, the situation we face today did not exist.Partly on pointClaims · 20 wordsUnfortunately, we are now faced with two referendum initiatives: one that is very real and another that is being threatened.Reasoning · 19 wordsNow more than ever, we need a prime minister who can unite Canadians from coast to coast to coast.