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Joël Lightbound

97 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Luc Berthold (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, their styles may differ, but this Liberal Prime Minister has the same obsession with grand theatrical announcements as his predecessor. This is just like the solemn promise to buy and build in Canada. It was all just hot air, because he has done exactly the opposite ever since making that promise. Government procurement from American companies has increased by 50%, and $8 billion of our money—money that belongs to workers, mothers and the unemployed—is boosting the American economy. It is like watching the same play against a different backdrop. When will he stop grandstanding and actually invest in Canada?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 32%Claims 64%Promise 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 13 wordsit is astounding to hear the opposition member talk about grand theatrical announcements.PositioningOff point Claims · 47 wordsHe should go talk to the 5,000 Davie shipyard workers who will be working on the construction of six icebreakers.1 He should go and talk about grand theatrical announcements to the 400 workers in Saint‑Bruno and La Pocatière who will be building train cars for VIA Rail.2 Positioning · 18 wordsI am left completely perplexed every time they attack investments like this one under our buy Canadian policy, PositioningClaims · 15 wordswhich is working and which relies on Canadian content and the expertise of our workers. Promise · 4 wordsWe will keep going.Vague promise

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