“Mr. Speaker, the women’s entrepreneurship loan fund was supposed to help women entrepreneurs access capital. After a three-year ATIP process, I found that one federally funded administrator received only 27 applications despite a federal target of 1,200, and another issued only 23 loans despite a target of 815. With over $7 billion in the program, Canadians should get better results. Why is the government measuring success by dollars spent and announcements made versus real results for our entrepreneurs who really need the support of the government?”
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordssince it is Women’s History Month, I want to thank my hon. colleague for the question.1ThanksClaims · 72 wordsWhat I will say is, that is false.Our women entrepreneurship strategy has helped empower well over 600,000 women entrepreneurs across this amazing country to start, scale and grow their businesses.2We have also attracted $7 billion to help women entrepreneurs across this country.3This summer alone, I also announced our replenishment of funding toward the women entrepreneurship strategy.4That is more money, $173.3 million, to help uplift women across the country.5Promise · 15 wordsWe are going to do everything we can to lift and empower them as well.Vague promise