“Mr. Speaker, that is not a fair answer, because I have the documents from the minister’s department, which states what I just said in this House. Canada’s productivity continuing to lag its peers, and access to capital for women entrepreneurs, and all entrepreneurs, remains a top concern. In addition, we still do not have internal trade, key supply chains in western Canada are compromised, and there are no major tax reforms to meaningfully support existing small businesses in Canada, yet the government continues to shovel more money out the door without results or accountability. We can just think of the green slush fund. Will the minister stop the theatrics and actually deliver for our small businesses—”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 8%Thanks 12%Claims 66%Promise 14%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordssupporting women entrepreneurs is not theatrics.PositioningPartly on pointThanks · 9 wordsI want to give a big shout-out to WeBC, ThanksClaims · 50 wordswhich is a Kelowna-based organization that has received $5.6 million in helping women entrepreneurs with mentorship, business training, export support and growing their finances.1Through our women entrepreneurship strategy, we are supporting women across the country and investing $173.3 million to help women entrepreneurs start, scale and grow their businesses.2Promise · 11 wordsWe are going to do everything we can to support them.Partly on pointVague promise