“Mr. Speaker, October 1 is the start of Women’s History Month. It is an opportunity to reflect on how far we have come. There was a time when women were not even allowed— Mr. Speaker, October 1 is the start of Women’s History Month. It is an opportunity to reflect on how far we have come. There was a time when women were not even allowed in the House of Commons. Today, we have the largest women’s caucus in Canadian history, with 71 female members of Parliament who are passionate advocates for their communities. We have come a long way, but there is still much work to be done. Can the minister explain how our government is building on this progress for the next generation of women and girls?”
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Thanks 12%Claims 80%Reasoning 8%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsI thank my colleague for the question.ThanksClaims · 47 wordsAcross Canada, women are making history.They are entrepreneurs, public servants and community leaders.Partly on pointOur government is working to break down barriers and open more doors.Vague promiseOver the past year, we have invested about $1 billion to create more opportunities for women and girls across the country.1Reasoning · 5 wordsWhen women succeed, Canada succeeds.Partly on point