“Mr. Speaker, during the recent by-elections, Canadians made clear that we must rapidly diversify our exports. To do that, our government is working to make Canada a clean and conventional energy superpower to new markets while protecting the nature we treasure. In North Vancouver—Capilano, home to the largest port in Canada and across B.C., we keenly feel the opportunity to create good jobs and investment for our communities. Last week, the Prime Minister was in B.C. We saw the largest private sector investment in our province’s history. Can the Minister of Energy and Natural Resources update this House on what the government has done to achieve that goal?”
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Thanks 26%Claims 67%Positioning 7%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 22 wordsI would like to start by welcoming the member to the House.The people of Vancouver are fortunate to have this member.ThanksClaims · 56 wordsLast week, I was with the member, first nations chiefs, project proponents and the Prime Minister to announce that LNG Canada phase two now has shovels in the ground.1This $33-billion investment will be the second-largest LNG facility in the world.2It will use 15,000 tonnes of new Canadian steel.3It will generate 6,100 new jobs, 4Positioning · 6 wordsand we are just getting started.PositioningVague promise