Analysis · Speech on a motion · beta

Abdelhaq Sari

981 words · 63 sentences · 85 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 3%Claims 66%Positioning 17%Reasoning 7%Promise 1%Procedure 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 33 wordsbefore I begin, I would like to say that I will be sharing my time with the member for Mississauga—Lakeshore. I am grateful for this opportunity to talk about the official opposition’s motion, GreetingClaims · 64 wordswhich addresses the reality of the cost of living.Unearned certainty High prices are a daily reality in my riding of Bourassa and in many Montreal neighbourhoods. In Montreal North, families are counting every dollar at the grocery store every day. Workers are wondering whether they will be able to fill up their tank before their next paycheque. Retailers are absorbing price increases they never chose. Positioning · 20 wordsThese people do not want slogans like the ones we are hearing from the opposition. They want initiatives and results.Positioning Claims · 37 wordsWe live in an unstable world. Wars on the other side of the world, trade tensions and weakened supply chains have impacts that trickle down to our kitchens and gas pumps. Canada did not trigger these crises, Reasoning · 7 wordsbut it has a duty to respond, Claims · 65 wordsand our government is responding. We chose to act here and now. We chose to take action with Bill C‑38. Bill C-38, the Canadian fuel affordability act, extends the suspension of the federal excise tax on gasoline, diesel and aviation fuel until January 31, 2027.1 Zero, not a penny, as we say back home in Quebec. This suspension has been in effect since April 20.2 Positioning · 5 wordsMembers opposite surely remember that.Positioning Claims · 29 wordsFrom day one, the price at the pump fell by an average of 11¢ a litre.3 In practical terms, that means savings of about $5 on a 50-litre fill-up. Positioning · 18 wordsWe are doing this responsibly. We are doing it, of course, because we are thinking about Canadian families.Positioning Claims · 27 wordsThe tax will be gradually reintroduced in February and March 2027 at half the regular rate: 4five cents per litre for gasoline and two cents for diesel. Promise · 8 wordsThere will be no shock and no surprises. Claims · 37 wordsThe impact goes far beyond the family vehicle. From truck drivers and farmers to delivery companies and grocery stores, the entire supply chain that feeds the country will benefit. Yes, diesel prices have risen around the world, Procedure · 23 wordsbut let us set the record straight and correct a few points that have been raised by the other side of the House.Procedure Claims · 48 wordsDiesel costs less in Canada than in most G7 countries.5 Since the end of February, prices have increased less here than in the United States, 6and the provincial diesel taxes, which range from roughly nine cents to more than 20¢ per litre, are not necessarily up to Ottawa.7 Procedure · 5 wordsLet us talk about affordability.Procedure Claims · 12 wordsThat has to do with more than just the price per litre.Partly on point Positioning · 7 wordsThe opposition wants to talk about fuel, PositioningProcedure · 6 wordsso let us talk about it, ProcedureReasoning · 26 wordsbut affordability is not just about fuel. It does not come down to just the price per litre. It is measured in a number of ways.Partly on point Procedure · 14 wordsI will quickly list them off and go through them in more detail afterward.Procedure Claims · 20 wordsAffordability also comes down to groceries, home ownership, pay and our children’s lunch boxes. It is also measured in equity.Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsLet us talk about groceries.Procedure Claims · 149 wordsThe new Canada groceries and essentials benefit provides 25% more than the old GST credit.8 It is tax-free, and it benefits more than 12 million low- and modest-income Canadians.9 A payment is coming up this week.10 With this summer’s supplement, a family of four will receive up to $1,890 this year and about $1,400 a year for the next four years.11 The amount for a single person is $950 this year and about $700 for the next four years.12 Affordability is measured in home ownership. For first-time homebuyers, there is no GST on homes up to $1 million, 13and it is reduced for homes between $1 million and $1.5 million. That means up to $50,000 in the pockets of our young dreamers who really want to make their dream of owning a home and getting on the property ladder a reality.14 It is also measured in terms of pay, Partly on pointProcedure · 4 wordsas I said earlier.Procedure Claims · 46 wordsWe cut the tax rate for the first bracket of personal income from 15% to 14%.15 This has benefited 22 million Canadians.16 It puts $420 per year per person in their pockets, 17or $840 for a dual-income household.Partly on point It is reflected in a child’s lunch box. Procedure · 7 wordsAllow me to make a quick aside: ProcedurePositioning · 27 wordsIt is a shame to hear people on the other side of the House say that this measure, which helps many young people and schoolchildren, is garbage.Positioning Claims · 78 wordsCanada’s national school food program, which is now permanent, provides meals for approximately 400,000 children each year.18 It saves a family with two children nearly $800 a year on groceries.19 It is also measured by our work and actions in the area of equity. Thanks to the automation of federal benefits, 5.5 million low-income Canadians will automatically receive the support to which they are entitled, such as the Canada groceries and essentials benefit and the Canada child benefit.20 Reasoning · 19 wordsA benefit that is not claimed because of a lack of information is, unfortunately, a benefit that is lost.Partly on point Claims · 34 wordsIn closing, we have no control over the global forces driving up prices, but we do have control over the measures we must put in place here and now and over our government’s initiatives, Positioning · 73 wordswhich must be just, fair, sincere, and, above all, responsible. This responsibility aspect is exactly I am so uncomfortable with the motion that has been introduced by the party across the way. Our response is to take meaningful, measured action and, as I just said, to act responsibly. The opposition is proposing long-term solutions to a problem we are facing today. We are delivering results today while building a stronger economy for tomorrow.Positioning Reasoning · 14 wordsMaking life affordable and strengthening our economy is not a choice between two goals. Positioning · 14 wordsIt is a single, unified commitment to families in Bourassa and across the country.Positioning

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