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Scot Davidson

1123 words · 57 sentences · 80 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 94 / 100
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Aside 2%Claims 60%Reasoning 9%Procedure 6%Positioning 9%Promise 11%The ask 3%

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Madam Speaker, Aside · 11 words“fill her up”. When is the last time we heard that?Aside Claims · 98 wordsAfter all, with diesel prices at record highs, everyday Canadians who drive a truck for work or for personal use are running on fumes and whispering a prayer when they finally pull up to the pump. As a consequence of Liberal economic failures over the past 11 years, Canadians are paying 41¢ more per litre on diesel than the world average price and 32¢ more per litre than Americans.1 This is driving up the cost for farmers, businesses and families in my communities in York—South Simcoe and right across our great country, especially in rural and remote areas, Reasoning · 13 wordswhich make up such a pivotal part of our Canadian way of life. Claims · 33 wordsThis does not just affect Canadians who drive a truck. Diesel powers farm equipment that grows our food, machinery that powers our industries and tractor-trailers that deliver goods across the country and beyond. Procedure · 43 wordsThis is why Canada’s Conservatives, as the official opposition, have brought forward this motion calling on the government to adopt our emergency fuel relief plan to provide immediate relief to Canadians struggling to afford fuel and faster energy infrastructure approvals for the future.Procedure Claims · 150 wordsIt has been almost two years to the day since we were in the same place debating a different motion on fuel affordability.2 At that time, the former Liberal minister for natural resources stood outside these very doors here and said, “They have no view on how to build an economy of the future. Oil and gas will peak this decade. In fact, oil is probably peaking this year, and the economic plan of the Conservative Party of Canada is simply to produce more oil and gas into a market that inevitably, if we are going to fight climate change, will begin to decline.” The minister went on to say, “That is a ridiculous economic plan for the future of this country. It will leave Canada uncompetitive and poorer on a go-forward basis.... I encourage...the folks who sit on the Conservative benches to at least try to tell the truth.” Positioning · 3 wordsThe truth hurts.Positioning Claims · 61 wordsThe Liberal government spent 11 years calling Conservatives and Canadians who supported pipeline projects climate deniers. The Liberal members, and I can see the Liberal member for Whitby across there, used the term 67 times in the last Parliament.3 They spent 11 years telling anyone who wanted to build an energy project that they were on the wrong side of history. Positioning · 16 wordsIt was not about economic viability or the merits of each project. It was all ideological.Positioning Claims · 61 wordsWhile the Liberals were dishing out insults and lecturing Canadians about a net-zero future, they also brought in devastating antidevelopment laws for our country. Conservatives warned that these laws would stop projects from being built, but the Liberals pushed them through anyway. As a result, critical energy investments sorely needed in the country died: 16 major projects worth over $176 billion.4 Positioning · 10 wordsCanadians are paying for those failures at the pumps today.Positioning Claims · 27 wordsTwo years ago, the Liberals said that oil was peaking, that the market was headed for decline and that Conservatives who wanted to produce more were ridiculous. Procedure · 8 wordsWell, let us look at the market today.Procedure Claims · 24 wordsThe G7 is releasing 100 million barrels from emergency stocks.5 Diesel is at an all-time record high. The market is not in a decline. Reasoning · 11 wordsThis is a market the world actually needed Canada to supply, Claims · 77 wordsand the government spent a decade telling us not to build. Now the Liberals will tell Canadians that the price of diesel is out of their hands and that it is all due to global factors. There is no doubt that the wars in the Middle East and Ukraine have contributed, 6but why is it that a trucker in America faces those same factors and headlines, yet pays 32¢ a litre less than a trucker in Canada? Reasoning · 19 wordsA big part of that is the projects the Liberals blocked and the taxes they impose on Canadian fuel. Claims · 7 wordsThey were wrong about the market then, Positioning · 32 wordsand they are wrong to absolve themselves of responsibility now. They need to reflect on their failures and their ideological vendetta against Canadian energy production, which have led to this situation today.Positioning Claims · 105 wordsThis is felt across Canada, including in the communities I represent. Just yesterday, I spoke to Garret, a local farmer. He told me that fuel surcharges are showing up everywhere now: on his custom work bills, on harvesting and on every single incoming shipment that he has. Every time costs go up, it comes out of the farmer’s pocket, money that would otherwise go to equipment payments and barn repairs. He warned me that this is not just a problem for this season. Next year, it will show up in cropping, in the grain market and in what it costs to move milk and cattle. Reasoning · 14 wordsWe know that when farmers’ costs rise, the price of food rises with them.Unearned certainty Claims · 14 wordsGarret paid $1.10 this same time last year, 7and just yesterday, he paid $2.28.8 Procedure · 21 wordsThat is why Conservatives are proposing the emergency relief fuel plan today, not just for our farmers, but for all Canadians.Procedure Reasoning · 18 wordsCanadians need relief now when filling up, and they need the infrastructure that brings costs down for good. Promise · 45 wordsWe need to eliminate all taxes on diesel sales until at least Canada Day by extending the full excise tax cut until July 1, 2027, and removing the GST from fuel. We would permanently scrap the federal industrial carbon tax and the clean fuel standard, 9Reasoning · 17 wordswhich increases the cost of producing diesel today and discourages the creation of new refineries for tomorrow, Promise · 36 wordsand we would close the price gap with the United States within five years by raising Canadian diesel and refined fuel production to one million barrels a day and supplying every region with Canadian refined diesel.10 Reasoning · 10 wordsCanadian workers should be turning Canadian oil into Canadian fuel. Promise · 30 wordsUnder our plan, shovel-ready zones would prepermit areas for refineries, storage and transportation, so firms could build without even applying, as long as they follow all safety and environmental rules. Positioning · 9 wordsThat is cutting red tape and getting things done.Positioning Promise · 17 wordsThey would also get a 100% one-year deduction, which would back new refineries, expansion, storage and pipelines. Claims · 16 wordsThe Liberals were elected promising that they would move at speeds Canadians have never seen before. Positioning · 15 wordsThe problem is that Canadians are going broke at speeds Canadians have never seen before.Positioning Aside · 9 wordsNo one has a monopoly on a good idea.Aside Positioning · 12 wordsWe know the Liberals failed on energy production for over a decade, PositioningThe ask · 31 wordsbut today, they have an opportunity to do the right thing and support the Conservative emergency fuel relief plan today. I urge every member in the House to do the same.

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