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Luc Berthold

136 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Rhéal Éloi Fortin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, this bill, and the story and circumstances surrounding it, are moving. There is something special about it. My colleague is right to point that out. It is not often that everyone in this House can agree on something. It does happen, though not often enough for my liking, that we are all able to agree on doing what needs to be done for the benefit of the community as a whole. I will, of course, be giving a speech shortly. Unfortunately, it will probably be to repeat what I have already said. For now, however, I would like to ask my colleague a question. In his opinion, is this something that could happen again, at least in the coming weeks? Could we all set aside considerations that are sometimes a little too partisan and work together to do what is best for all our communities across Quebec and across Canada?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 8%Reasoning 32%Claims 27%Promise 11%Aside 14%Positioning 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 11 wordsI want to thank my colleague for his contribution in committee.1Thanks Reasoning · 22 wordsI want him to know that the sooner we get to work, the sooner we will be able to really change things.Vague promise Claims · 37 wordsHowever, things are already going well, because everyone in the House agrees that we should pass the bill quickly.2Unearned certainty Everyone in the House agrees with the principle.Unearned certainty The bill has to go to the other place now.3 Promise · 15 wordsI hope our friends at the other place will move as quickly as we are. Aside · 19 wordsI wish we could be unanimous and take a Kumbaya approach to all bills. Unfortunately, that is not possible.Aside Reasoning · 22 wordsThere are certain situations where we are able to do the right thing together, and I think this example illustrates that well. Positioning · 10 wordsI am glad we can do this for David’s friends.Positioning

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