“Mr. Speaker, the government is moving forward. Bill C-39 is all about speeding up a process and providing assurances that Canada wants to build. Let us look at what took place in Toronto last month, when the Prime Minister hosted world investors with literally historic amounts of money brought to the table, half a trillion dollars. Whether it is that particular special event or the amount of collaboration between Ottawa and the provinces in developing major projects, it is all part of a bigger picture to build a stronger and healthier Canada for all. Would the member not agree that a holistic approach is the best way of moving forward and doing what I just said?”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 71. The grade is held to 67, 30 above Signal.
67 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 39%Claims 41%Positioning 19%
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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 33 wordsit is music to my ears to hear my colleague, who has been a member of this House for the past 10 years all the while advocating for lengthy environmental studies and processes.1AsideOff pointClaims · 25 wordsThe previous government, under Trudeau, undermined investor confidence.This government is now playing catch-up, trying to attract foreign investment so that investors come to Canada.Positioning · 9 wordsThe Liberals should have been doing that work sooner.PositioningClaims · 22 wordsThey should have continued what we were doing prior to 2015.Investors from all over the world wanted to invest in Canada.Positioning · 13 wordsThey shattered investor confidence and now we have to start all over again.PositioningPartly on pointAside · 12 wordsAt least, hearing that sort of talk is music to my ears.AsideOff point