Replying to Jean-Denis Garon (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I am concerned because under Bill C-39, the government is getting set to privatize our airports. That includes the Mirabel airport. The Mirabel airport was built on land that was expropriated, desecrated and stolen. That came as a result of crimes committed by the federal government, as recognized in a motion recently adopted by the House. This asset should serve the community, remain public and be a tool for economic development. I wonder if my colleague shares my concerns, particularly with regard to the Mirabel airport.”
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Madam Speaker, Anecdote · 40 wordsallow me to express my sincere thoughts for the people of Mirabel, whom I met last week.There was a public meeting attended by my hon. colleague, the member for Mirabel.1At that meeting, there were people who were concerned.AnecdoteOff pointClaims · 55 wordsThey were concerned about a government that wants to rush through projects of national interest, such as a high-speed rail line, like the Alto project, for which there is no social acceptability, 2but which the government intends to impose through legislation that would sacrifice farmland by cutting it in half and split communities in two.Anecdote · 19 wordsThe people of Mirabel know the drill, and what happened has, quite simply, destroyed a once great community spirit.AnecdotePositioning · 5 wordsThe scars are still fresh.PositioningThe ask · 9 wordsWe need to talk to the people of Mirabel.Off pointClaims · 44 wordsHowever, the situation that Mirabel experienced will repeat itself in Berthier—Maskinongé and in Rigaud, where we were just two weeks ago to hear the concerns of all stakeholders.Partly on pointMembers will recall that no realistic cost estimate is available at this time for these projects.Positioning · 16 wordsIs that what the national interest is all about, recklessly throwing our money out the window?PositioningClaims · 4 wordsI am very concerned.Partly on point