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Sébastien Lemire

217 words · 12 sentences · 16 clauses

Replying to Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, earlier, I used the word “exaggerated”, which made some colleagues uncomfortable. Perhaps I could have used a more common expression, like “he went a bit too far” in his speech. In short, my question was about renewable energy. Bill C‑39 will help speed up the construction of major projects. I am thinking of hydroelectricity projects and wind energy projects. Does my colleague see a potential in Bill C‑39 for developing renewable energy projects, and why is it important to do so?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Reasoning 29%Claims 62%Procedure 2%Thanks 7%

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Madam Speaker, Reasoning · 39 wordsmy colleague from Madawaska—Restigouche should know that I will keep going a bit too far until our voices are heard outside the House because Quebeckers’ fundamental rights, the right to live in a healthy environment, are on the line.Off pointVague promise Claims · 31 wordsIt seems that a project of national interest is grounds for violating laws of interest to Quebec, the Bureau d’audiences publiques sur l’environnement et les lois environnementales, and social acceptability laws.Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsI will give an example.Procedure Claims · 11 wordsI campaigned alongside the Kebaowek community to protect their ancestral lands, Reasoning · 8 wordsbecause they had a right to be consulted. Claims · 36 wordsThe Canadian Nuclear Safety Commission had failed to do so. I am very proud to have been able to help secure the passage of an amendment and to have helped bring about change in this regard, 1Partly on pointThanks · 15 wordsand I thank the Conservatives for agreeing to remove the Indian Act from Bill C-5.2Thanks Claims · 57 wordsHowever, the Liberals came back with Bill C-15, and Bill C-39. Now, they no longer see any point in consulting first nations. They are disregarding that and they do not care. That sets a dangerous precedent. All of this is to introduce nuclear power and store its waste near drinking water sources, near 80% of Quebec’s population.3 Reasoning · 15 wordsIf that is the case, then yes, I will keep going a bit too far.Partly on point

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