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Claude Guay

134 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Cheryl Gallant (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, let me just remind people what happened here. The Liberals took out a nine-year lease on a concrete slab and agreed to pay for 10 years. That back rent helped pay for the stock options exercised by one of the spaceport’s shareholders. Liberal insiders are getting rich off insider trading while the brave women and men in the Canadian Armed Forces get rent hikes and black mould. As the government ramps up spending, Canadians should expect to see a lot more of this type of Liberal corruption.”
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Average 87 / 100
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Positioning 26%Claims 74%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordsI want to clarify my remarks but I will ignore the opposition member’s conspiracy theories.Positioning Claims · 99 wordsWe modernized the entire pay system for members of the Canadian Armed Forces.1 It now includes new and enhanced allowances that are in line with the requirements of military service. We adjusted the differential allowance to offset housing costs in areas where affordability challenges are most acute.2 We are protecting members in DND-managed residential housing units by limiting annual increases and capping their shelter charges at 25% of gross household income, 3and we are investing the revenues from those shelter charges back into the military housing portfolio to support the quality of life of CAF members and their families.4 Positioning · 20 wordsWe remain focused on fair compensation, personalized support and practical safeguards for the dedicated professionals of the Canadian Armed Forces.PositioningVague promise

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