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Kevin Lamoureux

149 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 3%Claims 56%Procedure 6%Anecdote 28%The ask 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 4 wordsI am loving it.Aside Claims · 8 wordsMcDonald’s Corporation Canada is visiting Parliament Hill today.1 Procedure · 9 wordsLet us look at some of the base numbers.Procedure Claims · 63 wordsIt has 100,000 employees across the country.2 When we think of products from Canada, let us think of Canadian hamburgers, potatoes, chicken and eggs, with 85% of what is sold through McDonald’s coming from Canadian producers.3 As a corporate citizen, I think of Ronald McDonald House and the many contributions to our health care system that have been made through Ronald McDonald House. Anecdote · 42 wordsFor 35 years, I have used my local McDonald’s as a meeting place for my constituents.4 I can tell the House that it is a great place to have fellowship with the community, with friends and with family, and so much more.Anecdote Claims · 12 wordsMcDonald’s Corporation Canada is having an open house later on this afternoon.5 The ask · 11 wordsI would encourage all members to get out and support it.

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