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Roman Baber

140 words · 13 sentences · 15 clauses

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Claims 80%Positioning 4%The ask 11%Thanks 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 46 wordsit has been three years.1 We remember the execution of teenagers at a music festival; 2the slaughter of men, women, children and babies; and the hostages, tortured, who were killed in Gaza, all murdered because they were Jews.3 Since October 7, the intifada has been globalized. Positioning · 5 wordsJihad is on the move.Positioning Claims · 66 wordsThe hate that targets Jews is not just limited to Jews. We remember 9/11, the Boston Marathon, the London buses, the Madrid trains and the German Christmas markets.4 We remember the shooting right here on Parliament Hill.5 Many proud Canadians, including Muslim Canadians, came to Canada to escape jihad. We all live peacefully side by side. A school in my riding got shot at three times.6 The ask · 15 wordsWe must please confront the intifada before it is too late.Vague promise We must never forget.Vague promise Thanks · 8 wordsMay all of their memories be a blessing.Thanks

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