Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 80%Positioning 4%The ask 11%Thanks 6%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 46 wordsit has been three years.1We remember the execution of teenagers at a music festival; 2the slaughter of men, women, children and babies; and the hostages, tortured, who were killed in Gaza, all murdered because they were Jews.3Since October 7, the intifada has been globalized.Positioning · 5 wordsJihad is on the move.PositioningClaims · 66 wordsThe hate that targets Jews is not just limited to Jews.We remember 9/11, the Boston Marathon, the London buses, the Madrid trains and the German Christmas markets.4We remember the shooting right here on Parliament Hill.5Many proud Canadians, including Muslim Canadians, came to Canada to escape jihad.We all live peacefully side by side.A school in my riding got shot at three times.6The ask · 15 wordsWe must please confront the intifada before it is too late.Vague promiseWe must never forget.Vague promiseThanks · 8 wordsMay all of their memories be a blessing.Thanks