“Mr. Speaker, there are more than 12,000 homeless people in Quebec. What was restricted to big cities now extends to all regions of Quebec. These are people who are suffering, who are hungry and who are at risk every day. They are dying, as we have sadly seen today. On behalf of the Bloc Québécois and no doubt all my colleagues in the House, I offer my deepest condolences to the loved ones of the woman who died. Quebec’s new government is making the fight against homelessness a national priority. Will the federal government follow suit?”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 76. The grade is held to 59, 30 above Clarity.
59 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 14%Positioning 9%Claims 31%Promise 46%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsI want to thank my colleague for the question.ThanksPositioning · 6 wordsThis is an extremely important issue.PositioningClaims · 20 wordsIn Quebec and Canada, we are facing a homelessness crisis that we intend to tackle through bold and ambitious action.Vague promisePromise · 30 wordsOur goal is to cut homelessness in half in this country.1This is one of the issues on which our government intends to work closely with the Government of Quebec.Vague promise