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Wayne Long

67 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Shuvaloy Majumdar (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, this Thanksgiving, the same family dinner costs 10% more than it did just a year ago. When diesel goes up, everything goes up. Farmers pay more to grow the food, truckers pay more to move it and families pay more at the till. The government says it wants to lower costs, but here is its chance. Will the Prime Minister vote for our emergency fuel relief plan today and drive costs down for families instead of giving empty promises and false prophecies?”
Statement grade
C–
58 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 60%Claims 18%Promise 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 27 wordswhile the other side focuses on caucus revolts, image reboots and finding the leader yet another riding to run in, we are focused on affordability for Canadians.PositioningOff point Claims · 12 wordsThe groceries and essentials benefit will lift 77,000 Canadians out of poverty.1 Promise · 15 wordsOn this side of the House, we are going to deliver affordability measures for Canadians.Vague promise Positioning · 13 wordsThe Conservatives can continue to vote against each and every one of them.PositioningPartly on point

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